Living Without You

I thought I would never

get past you;

it couldn’t have been

less true.

While lying in my bed

I realized

that you were the devil

in disguise.

The milky skin,

the charming smile,

nothing but just

a planned façade.

I’m wondering now…

what was in my head?

– because I wanted to give you

all that I had.

It is my first attempt at writing poetry; however, I recently had a revelation and I felt like writing it. Let me know what you think. If you are a “pro” at poetry, give me your advice.

I am always looking up for methods of improving myself.

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